Story time

[WOLF'S EYES]

Well BB insisted that i post my story (manga) here

so here it is and if u have any sugestion pm me i could use some advices:D


the name is : Angel punishment



THE FIRST ENCOUNTER

Blood, terror, screams; The world had suffered wars and people lived in fear and agony for decades. Painful battles have occured causing millions of victims and braking of families.
Yet the real tragedy was yet to begin.

In a peaceful village in a house lived two babies. but in a dark night with half the moon shining in the sky, evil creatures walked the earth aming for the two children. Arriving to the house, a monster was present in the babies room, where he grabbed the first child and was about to grab the other, until the first child cried in fear causing the second child to wake up. the first child was knocked unconscience, and they were about to grab the other, a bright light came from him which surrounded the room causing the monsters to leave the room with only one child. As the monsters flee, the parents came to the room, finding that their child was missing and causing the mother to fall on the ground crying with pain.
The monsters came back to their hide out it wa like they were in a cave with flames of fire and ashes surrounding the place inside and screams of pain echoeing in the place. Even before all these sounds and one voice was able to be heard from a person in black with long bleu hair
his name was Bless.
Bless *shouting*: You failed to carry on your mission, yet you returned infront of his highness
the monsters showed sorrow with their head bowing down, yet one of them showed a bit of anger.
Bless: Don't be arrogant thinking that u can be forgiven after bringing only one child with you....
You shall suffer for your failure.
Suddenly all the monsters burst inflames and disappear as they were evaporated.
Bless then turns arround and bows with head down.
Bless: I am so sorry Master, I have failed your trust. Please let me continue with the
mission personally
MASTER: Bless, you shall attain for your mistake by raising this child, teach him
to become my servant

15 years later in a bright sunny day Houe (the second child) and his friend Kali were working
in plantation ( PS: Houe is pronouced who eh together )
Kali : It's so hot !!!!!!!! , I am going to die...... *looks towards Houe* neh Houe, let's bail I am so tired *Nagging like little children*
Houe *planting some seeds*: it is our obligation to help in providing provision and besides it's not like you have done anything, you were lying there leaving all the job to me.
Suddenly kali gets hit in the head. It was his sister Anna
Houe: good morning Anna, still energetic as always
Anna: good morning, Houe kun*smiling*
Kali: Hey you, *face to face to his sister* do you want a piece of me
Anna ignores him and turns towards Houe
Kali *look surprise and say in a low voice*: Ignored, huh??
Kali *face is down and angry*: hey what's with the ignoring thing, as your older brother you should bow down before
Anna gives him a daring look, Kali *gets a liitle chill continues* : why i should just slap you right now
Anna*grabing Kali from his ear*: what, you wanna hit me , instead of helping out Houe kun? Besides ain't I but a hopless little girl *while spinning arround and showing her puppy eyes*
Kali : who is a hopless girl? you freakin liar
At the same instant Kali gets hit again by Anna => His body is on the ground but his legs are towards the sky.
Anna *angry* : you stay there....*turns towards Houe and continues* then i am going to get some refreshments *with a happy tone*
Houe : that Anna is always bullying her older brother, isn't right Kali ?
Kali : i am dead *his head burried under the ground*
Houe *with a sarcastic voice*: I shall pray for your soul to ascend to heaven
In Anna's kitchen, making some lemonade she remembers how she met Houe
(She was being bullied by kids, she was almost 5 years old, kids were throwing rocks at her while calling her names, Anna was on the ground and blood coming out her forehead and falling over her tired face she was in pain, and her eyes filled with tears wandering the reason of her suffery.A rock was flying towards her face, Anna closed her eyes waiting for it to hit, but it didn't instead she sees a hand infront of her face holding the rock befroe it hitted her. Anna could only see the back of the person holding the rock it was Houe)
Bully : what do u think you are doing
Houe : Stop it.... She doesn't dserve to be teated like this.
Girl Bully : why are you defending her?
Houe : why are you throwing rocks at her? would you like the same treatment, will it still brings you pleasure?
With these words all of the 5 kids put down the rocks and went away.
Houe turns towards Anna and extand his hand to her so he can help her get up.
Houe : are you alright?
Anna still on the ground extand her hand while looking at Houe's smiling face.
Next day both Houe and Anna were sitting under a tree. Anna was confused and sad while Houe was careless looking at the sky
Anna *with a low vice*: why did you help me?
Houe : the sky is very nice today
Anna *turns rapidly towards him shouts* : Answer me!!! why did you bother yourself to help a witch like me
Houe : so that was the reason, why?
Anna : it is because I have "RED EYES " like fire. But i never asked for them
Houe : God created everyone with a special characteristics you should never be ungratfule, be happy with your gift.....
Houe : I hate seeing people getting hurt for no eason. I was also been bullied by kids because of my white hair
but i didn't care because i accepted my gift. i am sure that your eyes are red for a reason.
Anna finished her lemonade and was heading towards the door. The first step she took outside, Anna droped the tray she was holding because she saw something that made her tremble in fear. It was the presence of shadow like creatures with bright yellow eyes , looking at Houe and Kali with the threat of death followed by the voice of Anna crying for them to escape.

[WOLF'S EYES]

Take care, please

Houe and Kali were being threatened by strange creatures who attempt to kill them , their teeth were as sharpe as wolf’s teeth all covered with saliva (looks like creatures in blood+)
Kali: what are these creatures? What do they want with us ?
Houe all surprised and afraid glued to his place and didn’t dare to move .
Anna *was shouting to them* : Run , run away (while tear drops were falling from her eyes). Suddenly one of the beasts attacked the two boys , trying to crush them into the ground , but before he could hit them , Kali pushed Houe away and both fell on the ground while the beast hit the ground causing it to break and dust covered the air.
Kali: let’s go, we got to run away
As Kali attempts to stand up a terrible pain made him knnel on one leg .
Houe: are you alright? What happened to you?
Kali: nothing wrong, I just scratched my leg.
Houe noticed that his right ankle was bleeding terribly
Houe: you’re injured! You are bleeding heavily,( in his mind : I see when he tried to save me his leg was hurt by the beast’s attack)
Anna arrived to her brother with fear for his safety. After seeing his injurie she covered her mouth with her hands and tears started forming in her eyes.
In the same time the creatures were looking at them with their eyes trying to tell them that they won’t escape again.
Kali: what are you doing?! RUN AWAY!!
And then he pulled Anna and Houe with his hands making them follow him while the beats were following them, the three oh the kids arrived into a cave where it used to be thei hideout.
Kali: we should be safe here.
The cave was dark and the only source og light was coming from a hole in the center of the roof of the cave.
Kali: hey, Houe close the entrance.
After they closed the entrance , the three formed a circle under the light and sat thinking and wondering about a solution for their problems.
Kali: don’t worry , everything is going to be alright
Anna: what are those creatures? What brought them to this place?
Houe: I don’t know, but I’ve seen these creatures before.
Kali and Anna were shocked when they heared these words.
Houe *continued with a trembling voice* : for many years tell now , I had this nightmare whre ai find myself surrounded by these creatures trying to capture me . and now my dream has become reality.
As soon as he finished his sentence, the stone blocking the entrance started to break. It was the monters who were attacking the stone causing it to break while shouting the cries that causes fear.
Kali: what power, they are trying to break in.
Anna: at this rate the stone will never hold.
Kali runs to a small stone bringing back with him a box filled with five dynamites.
Houe: where did u find these?
Kali: I found them when I was little but I never told anyone.
Houe: what are you going to do with them?
Kali: the only thing that is left for me to do. I will buy you some time for you to escape.
Shocked and surprised Houe replied: what did you say?
Anna slapes her brother with anger and continue saying: I will never leave this place without my brother .
Kali *looks at Anna with love and respect like it will be the last time he is going to see her*: Anna I love you , forgive me for what I’m going to do.
Then he punshed her in the stomach with all his force making her unconsience. Her last word were her brother’s name as she fainted . Kali *holding his sister and lying her on the ground looked up to Houe and told him* : I want you to carry my sister and run, after you reach the end you will find an opening after that you get down from the mountain and head to the village and warn them.
Houe confused couldn't say a word
Kali: now go
Houe: don't tell me... u want to blow yourself with the monsters.
Kali: yes. I can't move anymore i feel all numb I think I was poisoned
Houe: we can run together and call for help.
And when he finished his sentence he got hit on the cheeck.
Kali: my life doesn't matter if I can save my sister and the village.
Houe surprised
Kali *with a high pitch shouted at houe while shacking him a little* : stop shacking and run
Houe *looking away with his eyes trembling answers with a low voice* : I can’t face my fear alone .
Kali surprised stoped and looked at Houe with pitty.
Houe *his head facing down*: for years these monsters were hunting me , calling me in my dreams intending to kill me.
*Then he lift his head up and shout*: and now they came back for me in real life wanting to take my life away! You don’t know what fear means !!
Kali *shocked by Houe’s reaction replied with an angry voice while standing up* : I can’t say that I understand your fear , but I’m sick of your fear and attention . what happened to your calm and bravery didn't hate seeing others getting hurt
*Houe got shocked* my sister is going to get hurt and her life means more than your fear, please save her
Houe looks at him surprised seeing Kali for the first time being serious about his sister's safety .
Kali *shouted* : STAND UP!! If our friendship meant anything to you, STAND UP!!
Houe stands up, wipes his tears then shows a serious face , nod his head for approval and carried Anna on his back , the two men faced each other for the last time .
Kali: take care.
Houe: farewell.
Houe started running while carrying Anna, in the same time Kali broke a stick of dynamite and drew a line from the poweder coming out from the stick to the rest of the dynamites and started rubbing two rocks together so he could burn the powder , however before he could strike the rocks together, the stone blocking the entrance was broked and dust covered the entrance. Behind the dust appeared the monters with grudge in their eyes, Kali rappidely started to rub the two rocks together. The sparks light the powder. In the same time the beasts started running towards Kali trying to stop the explosion, in all this action only one thing came into Kali’s mind : Sayonara stupid little sister, it was fun uptill now.
Meanwhile Houe was running and then Anna woke up and awfully tired.
Anna: houe-kun, why are you running *then she looked around like she’s searching for Kali* where’s my brother???
Houe*with a sad and hopeless voice*: it is too late.
Suddenly a strong explosion came out shacking all the mine. With this explosion Anna got surprised then cried the name of her brother with all her might while tears were dropping from her eyes. But Houe didn’t stop, he continued running feeling sad for his friend’s death. Suddenly the mine started collapsing, the two survivors noticed the falling of the rocks and they both started running towards the exit. They finally arrived to Houe’s house, the door was open with force. His mother was sitting in the kitchen looked towards the door with surprise and attention. At the door there was Houe who was holding Anna, they were tired and covered with bruises. Houe looked at his mom and asked her to take care of Anna .
His mother answered: leave it to me.
She took Anna to a room upstairs where she had putten her in a bed and tried to comfort her that everything is gonna be okay and she could cry as long as she wants to , with this Anna hugged her and started crying on her shoulder, while Rose (the mother) shocked at first and then smiled and hugged her in return. Meanwhile in the kitchen Houe just finished telling the story of their encounter with the creatures , his father "Haki" *replied with a low but serious tone* : so this is what happened *while crossing his hands together and resting his head on them , then he continued * well I’m glad that u’re back safely.
Haki looked at Houe he saw him sad and angry at the same time.
Haki: what’s wrong?
Houe*with trembeled voice* : the village was always in peace and grace until the day that darkness came taking lives with him. I wonder when the grim reaper will stop taking the souls of innocent people.
Haki: the death of your friend was the life for his sister and yours. Being sad may be the only way for you to regret his death, but thanking him is what you should do Houe.
Houe looked at him with confued eyes, wondering what his father is talking about.
Haki continues: life is a cruel reality, many unfortunate events may take place, however it is equilibrated by fortunate events. There is no death without pleasure. Thank him by living .
Houe: Hie *with a smile on his face*.
Haki: I have a request to ask you don't mention the monsters to your mother.
As soon as Haki finished the sound of breaking glass was heard , it was his mother dropping a tray holding a glass of water.
Surprised by what Rose heard, she fell on the ground leaving a trace of water and broken glass from the tray she was holding.

[WOLF'S EYES]

Houe: mom, are you alright?
Rose : are you sure of what you saw?
Houe surprised answered with agreement.
Rose *terrified* : is it possible that they came back again?
Houe: what do you mean?
Haki: this wasn’t the first time you encountered these monsters. Fifteen years ago, in an unpleasant night, evil has entered this house, it was these monsters who stepped into your room, wanting the abduction of two child.
With these words Houe had his eyes wide open and his movement frozen.
Rose: it’s true, you weren’t an only child, in the past you had a twin brother you were both the hope of life and the will of god, until the night where these hope were shattered and your brother was kidnapped.... However after your brother’s abduction, our hope of a safe family was over, and we don’t know if he is okay or not, *and then she startes crying*.
Haki tried to confort her but she couldn’t stop crying.
At 2.am, Houe was in his bed staring at the ceiling remembering the events that happened with him, but what concerned him the most was the truth about having a twin brother.
Back at the mine that Kali collapsed a pile of rocks start to shake a little bit, suddenly all the rocks were pushed into the air and behind all the dust stood a monster who survived the explosion unleashing a fearsome cry, and his eyes are only showing filled with rage. Houe was in the meantime packing as he wanted to go on a journey he checked on his parents and on Anna. And then he went outside, as he closed the door and turned around he stopped and stood there like a statue.
Houe *with a tremble in his voice*: impossible, there is no way anyone could ever survived the blast.
It was the same monster who intented to crash Houe with his hand. In the same time, you can hear Houe's thoughts: why is he standing infront of me?
The two looked at each other in the eyes. The monster charged at Houe while showing his fearsome jaw, and then he jumped at him. While the monster was in the air Houe had his eyes wide open and didn’t move, instead he stood there . Suddenly a sound of a sword cutting was heard. Houe sees the back of a masked man just infront of him who cuts the monster into two halves while the monster was still in the air, then the two pieces were splited and passed beside Houe and crashed on the ground. In the same time Houe's mouth and eyes were wide open with shock by what he have just seen. The man turns around and take off the mask revealing his true identity.
Houe: it's you.
The masked man was no other than his father Haki.

[Lemonachi]

Ah yay I found it! Haha I see why I didn't notice it before and none of the other members. (I don't usually read Fan-fics/stories)

[WOLF'S EYES]

lol well hope you like it and as i said before
do post your opinions and your sugestions